by Brandy Wilds Aug 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Its been awhile since you have been around. |
Oh that's really good! nice work, |
by ♥sheena♥
I love this poem!!! Its so good!!! Keep up the great work!! |
by Brandy Wilds
Thanks for the advice and the complamints. ill be sure to edit that later. |
Good poem. Sad and meaningful. The feeling in it was good. And it flowed really well. To make it better you can put it in stanzas..like four lines in each stanza. It makes the poem look more professional and easier to read. |
Omg, that is a great poem. Really strong words!! 5/5. Your a great writer. Keep up the good work!!! Luv ya, Abs! |