Its been awile

by Brandy Wilds   Aug 29, 2006


Its been awhile since you have been around.
Yet everywhere i look, memories of you can be found.

Over there is the first place we kissed.
Right there is where you almost hit me but missed.

All the days of working with you and my dad,
I think about it, and actually its kinda sad.

We let all the feelings go by unnoticed,
and neiter of us could tell the truth.
well, i think its time to.

You need to come back home,
cuz without you im all alone.

Ive fallen for you faster then i have ever before,
cant you realize ill love you forever more?

Thats right i said it.
The \"L\" word we both said we hated.

now its been weeks since we could even talk,
ive gotten so depressed i dont even want to walk.

how can you leave me here without you for so long?
This all feels so wrong.

We both know we should be together.
Cuz thats where i want to spend forever.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Oh that's really good! nice work,
    thanx 4 ur comment 2,
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥sheena♥

    I love this poem!!! Its so good!!! Keep up the great work!!
    ♥ Sheena

  • 18 years ago

    by Brandy Wilds

    Thanks for the advice and the complamints. ill be sure to edit that later.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Sad and meaningful. The feeling in it was good. And it flowed really well. To make it better you can put it in stanzas..like four lines in each stanza. It makes the poem look more professional and easier to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Perfectly Imperfect

    Omg, that is a great poem. Really strong words!! 5/5. Your a great writer. Keep up the good work!!! Luv ya, Abs!