Omg, that is a great poem. Really strong words!! 5/5. Your a great writer. Keep up the good work!!! Luv ya, Abs!

Good poem. Sad and meaningful. The feeling in it was good. And it flowed really well. To make it better you can put it in stanzas..like four lines in each stanza. It makes the poem look more professional and easier to read.

Thanks for the advice and the complamints. ill be sure to edit that later.

I love this poem!!! Its so good!!! Keep up the great work!!
♥ Sheena

Oh that's really good! nice work,
thanx 4 ur comment 2,
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