Death of a Loved One

by TRAGiC BEAUTY   Aug 29, 2006


When the death of a loved one
Happens to occur
It can make the world crazy
And make it a blur

It can turn the whole world upside down
And make you cry
And make you scream
Why do people have to die

Can't they just live forever
And have a long full life
I just wish some sick people
Wouldn't give up the fight

But after everything's over
And everything's done
You still won't be able to get over
The death of a loved one

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™

    I love it!! Absolutely love it. Beautifully written and I can totally relate to it. I hope your okay =] Full of emotion and basically I can shut up now and tell you how wonderful it is and give you 5/5 =] (It deserves more)
    Much Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem. Girl you keep amazing me with how good you write, it's like your poems get better and better. This poem was very sad and if it's true I'm sorry and I hope you get over the lost soon

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