Silent Tears

Another great poem, as i can relate to it, that is how i feel sometimes. great job once again. 5/5

Good job. I do have some suggestions for..please don't take them harshly^-^. There's a lot of poem with this kind of topic, but there's a major difference between good and average poems.
Try not to use "i" too much. Add more imagery to each line so it doesn't sound to plain or cliche.
Try like:
Weeping silent placid tears,
Not wanting anyone else to know,
How depression swallows me whole
There is no way they'd understand

Something along those lines.

Hey :) that was pretty deep man. this poem has potential tho... and the style works well for you. i luved the stanzas! awesome *thumbs up*u really portrayed the emotion's from yourself to the poem so yea... keep it up... *hugs*

Ruthie xoxo