Comments : Shining Golden Rays [Haiku]

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad... As I said, I don't really like Haiku's, but you do them beautifully. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • Woweee-- Jessy! This was a great haiku! Loved the middle line, it was simply beautiful! Keep it up hun! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I love it. I like the theme of sunshine just around the corner, about to make everybody so very happy.

    Very cute. A lot expressed in the most simplistic lines.

    Good job.