by Wasted Fake Smiles Aug 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Tears roll down, hitting the floor, |
by emmerz
My only problem was with in the 3rd stanza, the lines were shorter than the rest of the stanzas in the poem, but otherwise a job well done. keep it up! |
by Jessica
Awhh, that was soo cutee hunny! The flow was good and easy to read, the descriptions were beautiful and full of love, and the emotion was clear.. Great job 5/5 |
by Dionne Jones
I really like this poem 5/5 |