Comments : You are my Everything

  • 18 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    I really like this poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, that was soo cutee hunny! The flow was good and easy to read, the descriptions were beautiful and full of love, and the emotion was clear.. Great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    My only problem was with in the 3rd stanza, the lines were shorter than the rest of the stanzas in the poem, but otherwise a job well done. keep it up!