Ohh. Hmm...I liked it. Good job. =]

Well, i think swollowing razor blades is a very bad idea...but i know how you feel. its a very short poem and from what i hear the more you write the longer they become (though i havent been writting that long). I like the connection with the devil, i've never thought of it that way, i always see it as an angry storm. good luck with writting and "may the pen be with you" =] haha wow. (i hope they have star wars there)