Fire {Palindrome}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 29, 2006


-Fire-
Burning wistfully,
Strong and bright.
Whispering softly,
Frantically dancing;
Touching gently
Gleaming flames.
Coldly reaching,
You.
-Souls-
Wistfully burning,
Bright and strong.
Softly whispering,
Dancing frantically;
Gently touching
Flames gleaming.
Reaching coldly,
You.
-Fire-

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Palindrome- The carefully placed words form the same
sentence, whether it is read forward or backward. For example, 'Mirrored images reflect images
mirrored' which includes a word in the center as a reversal point for the sentence or even the poem.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marz

    Yes, It is good...
    But...
    Hm...
    Not my style.
    Please don't take my comments seriously. Heeh.
    Nice descriptive words and, creative.
    Well that's all I'm going to say.

    ---MARZ OUTTT

  • 18 years ago

    by january friend

    -awesome-

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I like this poem, too; especially the frantically dancing. It's very descriptive and with words I wouldn't imagine using together but they fit surprisingly well. The activeness in that line contrasts with the touching gently in the next. I could literally see the flames slow down in my mind! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Black Stallion

    Another great poem i see nothing but great things for you in the future

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    I liked this one but it wasn't as good as the "Lost" palindrome! I still liked your word choice and i still admire you for being able to write this type of poetry! I couldnt change a thing!! 5/5!! Wonderful Write!!

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