I wanted to try this style when I first read it but admit it looks too difficult. You pulled this off though with such gently descriptins that wash over your reader.

The second to last line in either the first or second stanza is mis-typed and needs to be changed.

I think that lost is a stronger poem though it is refreshing to see someone take on a poem style more than once to explore what it has to offer.

This poem feels a little safe, like you found a system that made the palindrome easier to write. In turn it makes the second stanza weaker because much the same thing is being told again. But it works and it is an interesting read.

Bret

Loved it keep it up and ill keep reading :):)

would you read my newest poem please? its called The Sacrifice Of Love thnx xxx alex xxx

Amazing job again! it seems very hard to do but you do a great job! And Again I Like your choice of words! very well written indeed! 5/5 from me.
Keep It up!
And
Keep Smiling

-*-Tormented

Pretty good, though it doesn't really sound like the usual type of nature poems. I usually don't say much on formed poems. Keep it up

I liked this one but it wasn't as good as the "Lost" palindrome! I still liked your word choice and i still admire you for being able to write this type of poetry! I couldnt change a thing!! 5/5!! Wonderful Write!!

Another great poem i see nothing but great things for you in the future

I like this poem, too; especially the frantically dancing. It's very descriptive and with words I wouldn't imagine using together but they fit surprisingly well. The activeness in that line contrasts with the touching gently in the next. I could literally see the flames slow down in my mind! 5/5

-awesome-

Yes, It is good...
But...
Hm...
Not my style.
Please don't take my comments seriously. Heeh.
Nice descriptive words and, creative.
Well that's all I'm going to say.

---MARZ OUTTT