A Promise Imprinted

by manic moments   Aug 29, 2006


~For My Heart Breaker~

A memory imprinted
With blood of blame
I whisper your name to the night
And bleed out my problem in disdain

A hand reaching out
Cradle bleeding remains of my heart
A promise you made
Beautiful love torn apart

Tears glistening bright
Bleeding wrist of hate
A promise from you
A memory, black with taint

Watch the shredded purity
Fall through my out stretched hands
Stare into the bleeding purpose
Forgotten promise, where do you stand?

Incoherent blood spatter
Delirious memorises of being whole
Whisper to scream a word
Treason bled from my soul

Beating heart that longs for your touch
I reach into the misleading dark black
I feel emptiness slip between my fingers
Shredded purity of what was you, there is no turning back

Till the end I dream of you
Holding the nights at bay for lost time
Long sleepless days, nights gone to blur
Promise that turns me into a crime

Flick of blood across the walls
Quickened breath, promise breaking my heart
Memories flooding view of reality
Tearing my sanity apart

Will love you to the end
Of your body and mine
A promise from you
That our love will always shine

A memory imprinted
Shredded purity of our remains
Till the end I dream of you
As I bleed away my disdain

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I lvoe how you repeated the last line at the end..wow this poem was amazing, the imergry the energy, wow keep it up hunn.

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow good poem.. very deep and sad one tho. u r such an amazing poet u kno.. i have 2 favorites and u r one of htem... ne ways keep on writing i lvoe all ur poems and eveyrthing. so keep it up
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    U should show him ur poems dom. so he knows the hurt he causes u. it good. um....... just so u know i've started smokeing. i am doing it becasue it's safer than the blade for now. i'm trying to push the blade away. trying to find another release that doesn't ivolve blood. um. i'm sorry if finding this out has hurt u. i just wanted to tell u myself, not have u find it out of some1 else. also if u want to smoke, go for it. as long as u dnt cut i'll be happy. i'm here for u if u ever need me. love you and keep on writting. sorry if it has hurt u. but would u rather me cut or smoke??
    love always willow xxooxxoo