Comments : A Promise Imprinted

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    U should show him ur poems dom. so he knows the hurt he causes u. it good. um....... just so u know i've started smokeing. i am doing it becasue it's safer than the blade for now. i'm trying to push the blade away. trying to find another release that doesn't ivolve blood. um. i'm sorry if finding this out has hurt u. i just wanted to tell u myself, not have u find it out of some1 else. also if u want to smoke, go for it. as long as u dnt cut i'll be happy. i'm here for u if u ever need me. love you and keep on writting. sorry if it has hurt u. but would u rather me cut or smoke??
    love always willow xxooxxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow good poem.. very deep and sad one tho. u r such an amazing poet u kno.. i have 2 favorites and u r one of htem... ne ways keep on writing i lvoe all ur poems and eveyrthing. so keep it up
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I lvoe how you repeated the last line at the end..wow this poem was amazing, the imergry the energy, wow keep it up hunn.

    lissa