E-Love

by Atomic   Aug 29, 2006


They met upon the internet,
In a chat room just for teens.
He was two years older,
When she was sweet sixteen.

They chatted about the basics,
Even argued a word or two.
Hating and liking one another,
Falling deeper with no clue.

They spoke every other day,
About their likes and dislikes.
Everything was looking great,
Until when reality strikes.

"Online relationships are silly,"
She told him out of the blue.
The opposite of his thoughts,
But he laughed and said "it's true."

"You know I love you, right?"
She spoke very careful words.
"But I need to stop my caring,
'Cause E-love are just for nerds."

He heard less of her that month,
And even less of her that year.
He waited for her everyday,
Until she finally disappeared.

As the years passed on by,
He still waited for her online.
Counted down the seconds,
Until she changes her mind.

"Why are you on here everyday?"
Asked the people on the scene.
"Because I am the biggest nerd."
He would whisper to his screen.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh my goodness I want to connect and talk to him NOW! I want him for myself!!!!! LOL

    You have such a ease with words...your poems flow so nicely. I just love the way you write. Nice Atomic!!!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Noah

    That was just waaay too cute. I loved it, good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Noah

    That was just waaay too cute. I loved it, good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    That was hot amazing e-love good job

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I guess I was drawn to this poem because it relates to me, as my fiance and I met on the internet. Fortunatly for us though despite the 100 mile distance for the first 2 years we're now living together and getting married.
    Anyway, I really enjoyed this write. Not the usual thing I'd go for. But I like it nevertheless. I hate rhyme, but I found your use of it fluent and well written.
    I think you have a typo on the very last line...it should be " he would whisper to his screen."
    Also, in the second to last stanza you change tenses, "passed" is past tense but "waits" and "changes" is present. You may want to reword this.
    Thanks for sharing.

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