Ohhh. Atomic. I love this poem. It was really sweet, yet so sad. It was so well written and the flow was amazing. Great Job Hun.

OH;; THiS WAS SUCH A CUTE POEM! iT WAS SO ADORABLE! OMG! GREAT POEM!

_______HiS FRiEND*

I really love this poem. people can easily understand it

I have been sitting here for about 5 minutes trying to think about what to say...all I can think of is WOW. I really loved this...it was so beautiful and so sad. I can relate to this in a way...this brought tears to my eyes...I can't recall that a poem has ever made me feel like this. I really loved it...you did an amazing job.
5.5....this just doesn't seem like enough. lol I would give it a 10 if I could...or even a 20 (^_^) lol
Breanna

Wow that is really.. amazing. And sad and romantic. Wow. Fantastic job.

That was hell good.. u are an awesome writter. keep it up hun xoxo

Whoa that was sooooooo unique and sooooooo cool dear i love it so much..the way you write it, it was really really great..it was lonely and sweet too.
KEEP IT UP

They chatted about the basics,
Even argued a word or two.
Hating and liking one another,
Falling deeper with no clue.
^^
Atomic I have to say this stanza is just amazing !
It is great to see you writing again Atomic, I have missed reading your poetry girl ....
Take care ! Hope to see more of your writing soon.

Very cute poem

That's a great poem! I simply love it. I can understand all this situation. It deeply moved me.

Wow, I love this poem! Its exactly how if feel, well i'm a girl but still! Its awesome! Well its how i felt, till My aime came into my life. Now i'm good. Feel free to email me.

Wow that is an amzing poem it was sooo sed and cute, i can relate to it really well and can really understand it! Good job xXxOoO

I guess I was drawn to this poem because it relates to me, as my fiance and I met on the internet. Fortunatly for us though despite the 100 mile distance for the first 2 years we're now living together and getting married.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this write. Not the usual thing I'd go for. But I like it nevertheless. I hate rhyme, but I found your use of it fluent and well written.
I think you have a typo on the very last line...it should be " he would whisper to his screen."
Also, in the second to last stanza you change tenses, "passed" is past tense but "waits" and "changes" is present. You may want to reword this.
Thanks for sharing.

That was hot amazing e-love good job

That was just waaay too cute. I loved it, good job!

That was just waaay too cute. I loved it, good job!

Oh my goodness I want to connect and talk to him NOW! I want him for myself!!!!! LOL

You have such a ease with words...your poems flow so nicely. I just love the way you write. Nice Atomic!!!! :)