The truth, is finally being revealed
The smile, is finally real
((I really liked these lines..))

And I really liked ((yet disliked)) the ending... Something about it captured me and then pushed me away. Maybe it's because I don't like people who refer to themselves in poems ((even though I do it to. Lol.)) But that's the only part I disagree with...The rest was beautifully written and very strong. I love it.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5