Ohh i like this the twist is nt wot i though wod b but i like ur 1 betta, like a little mystery. gd job, keep writing.

Wow i love it. it has great flow and everything. i can relate to this alot. u have alot of talent. i wish i could write like htis. ne ways keep on wriitng and i will keep reading
take care
luve angie