by Ray
A future legend, I'm sure |
by debbylyn
This is absolutely beautiful and so true how lost love can kill the poetry in a poet's heart...sometimes forever. Well done....amazing! |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent. You are very talented. I enjoy reading your work! |
by Amber
Wow this is great! its reelie deep. you have a lot of talent. |
by Lovely Bones
Wow. I don't usually like long poems like this, but I loved this poem so much that I was actually craving more at the end. You have such a way with sweet words, and you express things so vividly yet softly. Utterly beautiful. |
This poem is georgeous. absolutely lovely darling. i didn't know that words could sound so beautiful until just now. deff 5/5. |
by Wallace
Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by gabriella
Wow. thats all i can say. i wish icould find lvoe likethat. keep up the good workit was soo perfect. 5/5 |
by nai
This is such a god poem, i really enjoyed reading it and it tells a beautiful story. |
by m00ngurl
It's really nive i love how u make it rymn, i'm still finding words in m for that, love the poem, love how the story within it ends...real nice... =) |
I like this..... 5/5 |
My first words after i read this was "wow". |
by Zack O.o
I totally dont get it mind explaining? |
by Gazelle
Loved it so cool |
by Anna Marie
Those words...those beautiful words you write. You fill me full of sadness and yet a sweet delight... |
by Chelsea
Aww i love ur poem!! this is my favorite line: "They were lost when I lost you." |
by Viola
Wow i really really LOVE this poem. especially the last stanza. it's incredibly good. the emotion is portrayed so well. great job! keep it up =] |
by heather
You used the word poet and lot but other than that very good . |
by Mr M
I reaslly felt what you did here |
by Mr M
I reaslly felt what you did here |