This was amazing...its so beautiful!! 5/5 from me

Abosolutely beautiful. 'Nothing is wanted more than the ability to be remarkable'-William Shakespear
i think in these words you attained that ability.
well done:)

This poem is absolutely b e a utiful i love it

Beautifully crafted and full of emotion and provocative thought.
Nice one!
Neil

A truly magnificent piece of work!
Enough said!

Neil.

I enjoyed reading it..
nice work!

Wow. this poem is breathless! i love the rhythem. i couldn't take my eyes off of my computer screen! this is am amazing poem! 5/5

xo kisses xo

This is an amzaing poem, very nice.

This poem was very interesting and touching to me... It was heartfelt
your really good at writing and expressing yourself in words. Big 5 4 U!!

Amazing

WOW! Did you write this yourself?? That was completely amazing

This was THE most beautiful poem i've read in months.

you are very inspiring.

This is a great poem and it does tell a beautiful story. It's one of the best I've read.

That is amazing.
extremely talented poet, you are
keep it all up
sarah -xo

Very good transitions

I thought this was beautiful.
and i know that person said 'poet' was used too many times. but i think that's one of the good things about it, as he doens't have an identity.
it's cool.
well done.

BEAUTIFUL ABOULUTELY BEAUTIFUL thats really all i can say about this poem

*annak*

I absolutely am in love with this poem. Amazing job! you have a beautiful gift, never forget that. 5/5

Amazing Job. I loved every part of it. I loved how you used ne'er instead of never. it reminds me of old greats like shakespeare. Once again, fantastic poem. Keep it up

This poem is incredible; to say the least, best poem i have ever read