I did like this poem but i thought that you used the same over again to make your poem fit out more its a bitl ike a song actually but its good nice work keep it up :):)

would you read my newest poem please? its called The Sacrifice Of Love thnx xxx alex xxx

This ones really good. it describes my experiences with my ex. sad.........

Thts soo sad........i luved it......alot of emotion into it....keep on writing..and ill keep on readin!!