by Kirsty palmer Aug 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My day of worry all started when I stood up straight |
That is such a scary situation and i'm sorry you had to go through that... but this poem is very good... and you are very talented to write it... Great work... imagery is great and very sad :'( keep writing alwaysss <3 |
by Colourful Mind
Im so sorry to here u was unwel but very good writing |
by Mousie
Great poem. Sry that happened to you, but you really relayed the emotions and the events well. it gave me goosebumps... great job! |
by lexy
Sorry this happened to u, but i love ur poems they keep me hypnotized like a story. Good work ;) |
This is a good poem and Its a good way that u showed the emotions of this poems!! |