Great poem sorry that happend to you.

Wow! its really good. sorry u have been through that.

Aww kirsty. it was a sad poem but it makes it even sader to think that it actually happened. i hope u get better and u will be in my prayers.

sophie:) xx

You explained it so well and so poetically...very well done

Hey Kirsty, nice poem! thanks for commenting on mine! Ill read more of yours soon! anyway perhaps you could check out my poem 'human trafficking' and tell me what you think!

This is a good poem and Its a good way that u showed the emotions of this poems!!

Sorry this happened to u, but i love ur poems they keep me hypnotized like a story. Good work ;)

Great poem. Sry that happened to you, but you really relayed the emotions and the events well. it gave me goosebumps... great job!

Im so sorry to here u was unwel but very good writing

That is such a scary situation and i'm sorry you had to go through that... but this poem is very good... and you are very talented to write it... Great work... imagery is great and very sad :'( keep writing alwaysss <3