Comments : Deliver Me

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    It was really good
    and very creative
    GREAT MIND!
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Black Stallion

    That's awesome i wish i could write a poem about being a package

  • 18 years ago

    by CoLliN

    Nice imagery
    i will try to write something like this 2....
    keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by stargirl49

    One word, lissa: AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! girl, you're a much better writer than i am. and you better stay that way.
    i miss you so much!! when are you going to come back to pennsylvania to visit me?! gosh darn it, you'd better come soon!!
    ~ur sexxi b----!

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    Ooh it's interesting. I liked that idea of being closed up like in a mail like that. Good stuff. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    I love this poem it had meaning and hope it it
    xxoroxyxo

  • THAT POEM EXPRESSED SO MANY THINGS ABOUT ME OMG IT WAS EXCELLENT

  • THAT POEM EXPRESSED SO MANY THINGS ABOUT ME OMG IT WAS EXCELLENT