by Bill Turner Aug 29, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Like the golden glow of the setting sun |
by Arsalan D
Your poem words complex thoughts and emotions which is wonderful to read. Thank you. |
by Melissa
Awesome collab with an outstanding message. It really couldn't be written any better... Excellent piece! |
Awesome job Bill and Meena. It was a great collaboration. I agree this world is heading downhill at an alarming rate. |
by Eibutsina
Two fantastic respected poets...what more could I expect than a five star write...I can see the blend of Bill and Meenas talents in each stanza, its a strong piece with a powerful message...rather thought provoking as well. Great write guys! |
by C Cattaway
I cannot improve on Anna's comment, however, as a collaboration, it does rather prove the point that as a 'we', you two have written an incredibly thought provoking poem, with a deep meaning into society at it's peak. Very well done to both of you.. xx |