Omg i love htis one.. wow this is an amazing poem. i love how u wrote this. my favorite stanzas were the last two. wow thats all i can say. i am in awe of u and this poem. wow jus wow. keep on writing.. u have sooooo much talent
take care
luve ya angie

So sad dom. so sad. u have such talent with writting. u really do. keep it up adn know i'm here fro you.
love willow xxoo

I love how youyr poems have a godo controlling metaphor..somethign that sustains and goes throughout the whole poem. vr lovely.

great jobb.
lissa