This poem rocks....beautifully done. I love it!!!!!!

Wonderfully done - this piece speaks the language of love in an eloquent, heartwarming way.

very well done.

good luck and peace
shobhana

The PANTOUM form is interesting!! I'm impressed! NICE WRITE!!! I must say it's a beautiful piece!!! Nice to be reading again!!!! I'm not sure why I haven't been here but I'm here now!!! LOL Awesome write

No Joke. That poem was AMAZING! Its like one of my favourite poems... hehe.. Wow = ). Great JOB! ... keep it up .. = ).

- ThuggY

Wow its so beautiful and descriptive. and the imagery is amazing. this is a favourite of mine now. well done 5/5

This poem's structure exactly describes the kind of love we should be in: In never-ending circles. This is the first time reading a pantoum, but it was a very lovely piece and the repetition enhanced the feelings of the poem instead of toning it down. :) Keep writing! 5/5