Dustyn

by jordynn   Aug 29, 2006


I miss you more and more everyday
i wish you would have decided to stay
i wish you wouldn't have taken your life away

what was it for?
a drunken night, to even the score?

imagine what we feel now.
without you here every sundown.
we miss you dearly
we always have

where will we wait
when we leave this place
where will we find you, find your trusting face.

we cry at night, fall asleep alone,
a taken life, was your own.
too soon it came, for your own good.
we wish it upon ourselves, by your grave we stood.

was it worth it now?
to leave with a stun.
just because,
you thought she was the one?

*I'll miss you dustyn, till forever ends*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    My gosh, this is such a sad poem. great choice of words, flow is good, excellent piece, 5/5. so full of emotion.

    keep writing, u have talent
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christina

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