Wonderful sweet poem. Very heartfelt and meaningful. It flowed really well and you had some good rhyming in it at parts. [5/5]

Wonderful Steven, an excellent penn you have here!!!

Beautifully done my friend. What a wonderful poem.

A wonderful write Bill. Written from the heart. Filled with love and passion. Just a couple of things...

6th stanza, first line:
"I shall wait for you an eternity"... I don't think you meant to put "you" in the middle of the line?

7th stanza, last line
"I wish you could seem see deep into my heart"... Did you mean to put seem? Or do you mean something else?

A beautiful write, which I very much enjoyed.

This is much too close to my own situation and heart.I can relate to this as if I'd wrote it myself.It is so sad and beautiful.Words fail me.

Gary Jurechka