Its so sad but i really like it.
Great job.

Wow!! That poem was excellent. Practically brought tears to my eyes. It was so sweet..but sad. Excellent write.

&& thanks for the comment.

Wow..just..wow, that is an awesome poem!! you are a really really good writer..great job, keep it up

Wow that is awesome
that brought tears to my eyes
you are an amazing writer for 11
keep the good work up

This is soo soo good.. it neally brought me to tears. you are an awsome as writer consitering our onli 11.. keep up the exelent work..

Omg another great poem! except this one made me cry! my grandmother died of cancer so i can sort of relate!
great job
your like my fav. writer on this site
maybe because i can relate to most of ur stuff and i have a feeling we have alot in common
ttyl
taylor

This is really good and sad. I love this poem. keep up the good work.
xoxoxox
jess

Oh i loved it you did an exellent job and anyone who tells you other wise is CRAZY i love it so much i almost cried you did a wonderfull job

Wow that is so sad...i lost a very close friend one time but i they died because of suicide..anyways great poem
auna

Oh my gosh it is unbelievable that your 11!! that is an amazing poem and it brought tears to my eyes this is amazing!! god has blessed you with an amazing gift girl you should be proud!!

This poem is very moving. it made me cry. i loved it very much. you have a true talent for showing emotions through writing.

This is very good and sad ive had a few family members pass away from cancer and its not easy! but this is very sweet and good so keep up the good work!

Very sad. Well done though. To be so young, you do a great job! Keep it up!

Awww that is very sad. May God bless him.

It was written very well
i love it

Great job

5/5

im onli 13 and i write a lot too... i just found this site tho, so yea

i live in Hopatcong, NJ, which is about a half hour from NY, not including traffic ;-)

message me, i wold love ta talk to yu, considering there arn't many young writers on this site