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by Misstress   Aug 30, 2006


Drooping eyelids on a pale moonlight
I'm uncoiling my feelings in sketching the night
All images and scenery embracing you
The sketches of a love forever true

From the rustles of palm leaves
A melody has cheered me to be believe
Of what was meant to be
An undying love, you and me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    I really like this poem!! 5/5 which is unusual coz normally i don't like love poems!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but wonderful job. Great use of imagery and vocab. I think the ending can be more powerful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    First i thank u for ur comments to my poems i really a appreciate it... by the way ofcourse you do a good job ur poem is such a great its really enjoyed reading thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god, this one is so beautiful
    so deep, you are great,5/5