Oh god, this one is so beautiful
so deep, you are great,5/5

First i thank u for ur comments to my poems i really a appreciate it... by the way ofcourse you do a good job ur poem is such a great its really enjoyed reading thanks

Short, but wonderful job. Great use of imagery and vocab. I think the ending can be more powerful.

I really like this poem!! 5/5 which is unusual coz normally i don't like love poems!!