by Peyton Aug 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I\'m just not happy anymore, |
by haley
You're really, very talented. |
I love this one....it discribes me sort of. |
by caroline
I really like this poem...please check out the one i wrote, u might really like it..good job, keep writing |
by skye
Hey jsut commeting back thanks u wirte good poems to, great poem 5/5 |
by *Charisma*
Lucy, thanks for commenting on my poem. you wanted some tips, but personally I feel this poem is excellent. You have a nice thought about no longer having any tears left and yet the pain continues and you expressed it in a readable rhyme scheme. 5/5! |