LOVE this one too!

-Mel

Great use of words 5/5...and i like how you made it short but your words are well put so it all goes together very well
auna

Lucy, thanks for commenting on my poem. you wanted some tips, but personally I feel this poem is excellent. You have a nice thought about no longer having any tears left and yet the pain continues and you expressed it in a readable rhyme scheme. 5/5!

Hey jsut commeting back thanks u wirte good poems to, great poem 5/5

Sarah

I really like this poem...please check out the one i wrote, u might really like it..good job, keep writing

I love this one....it discribes me sort of.
This one is really good....

You're really, very talented.
keep it up.