Nice poem! so sad but you've got the essence perfectly! keep it up!

You push me away,
and dismiss how i feel.
but i am a person,
and what i feel is real.

that is my favorite part... LOVE IT! great job!

-Mel

Your first two lines were very good. enjoyed reading. Jpoet*

REALLY REALLY GOOD JOB GiRLY! iT`S AMAZiNGLY WRiTTEN && iT SHOWS THE EMOTiON && HOW YOU REALLY FEEL! GOOD JOB && i CAN RELATE TO iT!

*GiRL iN LOVE

Omg thanks for commenting my poem
I love this one ur a good writer also..!
Will you comment on more of my poems and i'll comment yours.....