Awesome poem, rhyming was great the flow was extremely smooth... i loved it! 5/5 my fav stanza:

Romantic walks on sandy beaches
Passionate love made in flowery fields
Holding hands under the colorless moon
Her fragile heart, he eternally yields..

5/5

Aww jess! this is so sweet and sad.
i loved the last stanza.
great write. avsolutely beautiful! i can relate completely!

sophie:) xo

Awww... that is the only word / sound i can use to describe my reaction.. hehe :p thx for trying to read my poem even if its not in english :p keep writing!

~angel~

Decent poem. It was very heartfelt and I could tell, worked on. Everything seemed really well thought out and wonderfully written! Keep it up! xxx

Brrr...gave me chills down my spine!! amazing! i love it! you have a real way with words this poem was so touching and cute! i cant believe how talnted you are

keep it up

sarah

I think it has emotion 5/5 it was awome

Aw, this is such a beautiful poem..

Great Poem, it was sad yet so beautifully written! the flow and rhyme were perfect!! i especially liked this stanza

"Breathtaking love cannot be replaced
Magical flavor of heaven she did taste
You are my everything, come back to me
Night after night, you hear her eternal plea.. "

Great write 5/5!!

Like i said before your poems are soo good! leaves me speachless!!!!

keep it up!

My favourite of your's...
This was beautiful.
Fantastic imagery, wonderful wording, awesome rhyming and very well written.