This is so good. your details are precise and i liked how you rhymed it near the end. I loved your line about your heart being a jigsaw, simply perfect. keep up the good work.

Omg i'm going through something just like this right now,i really love this poem it's great 5/5...i loved it sooo much keep up the greta work
auna

Wow that is really good LOVE IT! thanks for the comment on mine

-Mel

Omg i love this poem. i was in a situation like that and you tell it how it is!!! its awesome