Hahaha first to vote AND comment ^^ yeah its a good poem =)
i mean really good i give it a 5/5
-christian

Beautiful. So in depth and the words capture me. Your description puts me in your place to feel your emotions.
Fantastic and so well written.
Love ya.
xx Abby xx

Hey nice poem :) I like it :)
You can check out my lyrics if you want.. I'll check more of yours out :)
5/5 though i actually like this one well writen

Baie goet !!!!!
Moet S'e Dis 'n 10/10!!!!!!!!

Baie goet !!!!!
Moet S'e Dis 'n 10/10!!!!!!!!

This is a great poem. very moving and heart felt... wonderful!

Wow beatiful man. i loved it 5/5

I've read all your poetry, and i like it maybe you could read mine?