OH NO! That was so sad! I was hoping it would be a happy ending, but at least her parents are in jail. I just wished she had survived.

awwww that was so sad ive jst read all 4 and i am in tears! you are very talented! well done! luv amy xxx

This poem is soooo good. Its a horrible situation but u just put it together very nice.

i read all four od them and they are really good i wanna cry because they are soo upsetting how could some one od this to ppl

OMG... its friggin sad... =( dang im cryin... i cried on the first part, then on the second then third now im burstin loud =( dang amazing... gave it a 5... wanted to give u more... wish i could =) loved all of em...

OoOOoOops... thanx for sharing them all to me =) much love

AW that is so sad.. i read the first one planning to stop after that but it was just so sad i needed to find out what happened in the end. I loved them all, keep up the good work

Incredibly Powerful ... and Very sad! But again, very good!