I really like this poem!
keep up the good work!
its a really good peice of work!

5/5

OMGosh FREAK =]P.. i love it.. everytime i read your poems their getting better and better.. !

Wonderful poem the flow was good even the message of this poem. keep it up! 5/5

"i hope you'll listen so what i say" i think it should be losten "to" what i say

and yeah i like this poem hehe =)