by Jenni Aug 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Cast in the shadows and running in the wind |
by Shae
I LOVED the words you used. Throughout the poem I was thinking "What is going to come next?" 5/5 Great Poems! |
by e LIZ a beth
Excellent poem!!!! i love it. i wasnt expecting the ending i just assumed when i started reading it would be about nature but wow. great job. keep it up |
Aw.. i like this poem alot... its really cute.. and your a really good writer.. great word choices.. keep it up! |
by BrokenMisery
Its a really interesting idea, original and I liked your link from beginning to the end. Its a great piece, I like your expression, keep it up and dont be discouraged! |