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by disturbed one   Aug 30, 2006


I wish I didnt live,
With all of this regret,
But its so damn hard,
To try to forget,

Nobody said it would be,
So hard to part,
From the feeling,
Of a broken heart,

Sometimes I wish,
I could be dead,
Instead of this pain,
Fill me up with lead

Ive been kinda on a roll lately poetically speaking so if theres anything you want me to change or if there something i could improve on plz tell me i love criticism as long as its not flaming

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I like this poem but i think the flow is a bit off. Other than that though awesome job.