Ur not bad at writting poems ur style is just different (different is good)u've i really like how u end ur poem
Chavs
Chavs
Bury a chav
Now you have completed your task
For more you must ask
it flows together very well......5/5 keep it up can't wait to read more
auna

Lol great poem, and written well.. loved the ending.. it flowed wonderfully lol and your style is great.. very unique.. keep writting 5/5
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Kirsty Palmer xXx