Missing You

by Sweet As Sugar   Aug 30, 2006


I miss you

I miss you it hurts so bad...
I miss Ur smile , Ur hug , that makes me feel so glad
I miss every moment I had with you ,
a moment never forgotten ..

I miss your smile that shined my life...
the way I used to sleep every night with Ur sweet voice on the other line...
I love u so much , I wanna say it to u everyday every time !

I miss the way I used to wake up in the morning knowing my whole day will be
as good as new...
just by seeing , u , Ur smile
damn , without u I feel so blue ..
I feel so sick
cause missing u brings me the flue...

I miss the way u had Ur arms around me when I was feeling so down ..
The way u wiped away my tears, and erased every frown...
I miss your sweet phone call, that used to cheer me up everyday...
u call me , tell me u love me , and that with me ull always stay ..
I miss your arms that u rapped around me, made me in them want to stay

I miss the way , when I used to feel so secure , happy , relieved , comfortable when am besides you ..
I miss that so much, I want to press rewind, just to feel that again and again...
I wish I could see you right now , when I just count to ten ..

I miss every moment I spent with you
I miss the amazing times we had together
I miss the way u used to make me mad, I ask why, u say because I look so cute...
I miss it when u used to tell me that I look beautiful even when am in bad shape...

I miss the way we used to cuddle and watch TV...
I miss you baby, can u please come back to me?
I cant really wait for a couple of days...
cause missing u drives me insane...
all I do is shout Ur name!
I miss you!

p.s. please comment on my poem, tell me what u think!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful ... simple .. & sweet :) 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I know exactly how this feels.I sort of feel it everyday. and no matter what I always find myself wanting it back and wondering why she had to lie. but =/ oh well. I really liked this one too. good stuff =)

  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautifully written and wonderful flow of emotion. Although there really wasn't an exact format, it flowed nicely.
    4/5
    [tragic]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse Miller

    I've read a couple of your poems hopfully you take this advise not as critisism but a helpful tool: I noticed that your sentenses don't quite flow beause the sylabals to the matching line don't match. you should get them closer to eachother at least. But I like the feeling in your poems and you have a knack for imagery I can practicly see all your pain like it was my own. a very rare talent that might get you some recognition in hearts like it did mine...

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Ellsworth

    Thats good. i know that feeling im goin through that right now and it sucks. ty for commenting.