This is such a sad poem but i can relate alot life just isnt wat it ussed to be...but hold on...xoxoxoxox..if u ever wanna e-mail me go ahead...xoxoxo 5/5

I liked it

WOW! no I mean it, this is amazing. some really strong feeling used. Great use of words, and I love the end. Keep writing, you'll go far

P.S. PPL, if u have some time to kill, plz rate my poems (any of 'em)... I'll return the favour too.

Wow i totally understand what you are going threw that was awesome.

Hey this is so sad, im really sorry for your loss.
well written!
love mel

This is exactly what goes through my mind at night. I'm always thinking about ways to die. I've attemted sucide twice with pills and knife but both failed. I know that hanging myself would end it all fast but I'm still not sure about leaving everyone imortant in my life.

Wow...such a sad yet beautiful poem. suicide is neva a good answer though.cuz it hurts so many ppl. but i love ur poems. 5/5

Auna , there are other ways out, suicide is not the answer ,it takes strength to stand up and get help but I know you can do it, Tonight ,picture yourself a little older, in love with a great guy, happy ,in charge of your life,don`t let other peoples wrongs pull you down. dream about life not death, then create your own destiny!

This poem is good, it's so sad. and it makes people think about how horrible people lives can really be. keep on writing shanik

Wow this is such a sad poem! It's amazing, but really sad. Suicide isnt the answer though, things can ALWAYS get better, i don't know how people can just throw their life away like that.

shelby xox

Don't kill yourself. your to amazing and your writing to good!! you can be more than them...remember that

Nice rhyme you were real with this didnt try to be melo dramatic it was a good read good job.

lissa