by Megann Lee Aug 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My darling little child, hold my hand. |
by aDORKable x3
Wow that was a good poem... It really shows the trueness of war and how people are shipped off without saying goodbye... |
by lana
Im also in tears |
Megan, I'm crying here. I know my dad is breaking down from not being able to give me everything I want, but I'm not in need of anything but his hand in mine. I'm really close to him. |
Excellent poem. Was so sad, I nearly cried! It flowed really well! 5/5 |
by Willow
Oh thats sad. i have goosebumps. it's beautiful but at the same time sad. i love it. u write really good. |