Excellent poem. So detailed and full of so much emotion. It flowed really well and I really got into it, I even read it twice. [5/5] Great Job!

Oh thats sad. i have goosebumps. it's beautiful but at the same time sad. i love it. u write really good.
love willow xxoo

Excellent poem. Was so sad, I nearly cried! It flowed really well! 5/5

Megan, I'm crying here. I know my dad is breaking down from not being able to give me everything I want, but I'm not in need of anything but his hand in mine. I'm really close to him.
This poem is amazing, I'm in tears!!
But it's so great!
Love,
Your Wifey, Heather

Im also in tears
wow what a great and sad poem
keep wrighting with all the feelings in to your poems

5/5

lana

Wow that was a good poem... It really shows the trueness of war and how people are shipped off without saying goodbye...
great job!
*5/5*
MandiexOx