This is really good 5/5
very deep and powerful

thanks for commenting on my poem
xox

Ouch.. i love it!

Amazing way better then any of my poems and ur 15...so am i lol nice poem

Oh dear. This was very..memorable for me. It brought me back some not-so-happy-thoughts...Thank you. It reminded of my once forgotten Grandfather. How much pain he must have gone through, and how much pain we al went through. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Thats sad but it happens to so many poeple. so many people are left to sort out their lives after their loved ones had died at war. it's really sa. i understand it though. really good. keep it up.
love willow xxoo

One word...wow

All i have to say is wow

With every poem i read i am surprised more and more nice...