I really do like your poems. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself, and your use of the english language is beautiful to read. Very well done with this. xx

I like the style of the poem..
Probably one of your best.

Awh! This was beautiful! I think free verse is becoming one of my favourite things to read. You've done excellent at this one, with very good imagery. Loved it! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow love how you composed this poem!

keep it up!

Brilliant despcription you have such a talent!!! its very visual, i loved it.

well done
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