Wow I love that! the rhyming and everything is just awesome and the way you describe her. The way she blinks and the way she has you spellbound. Amazing descriptions and clever rhymes. Great job!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Aww so sweet, well written :) well done

Linds x

Your amazing i heart yoo

this poem is beautiful :)

Your an amaizng poet well done i love ur poems there fab
xoxroxyx

I love this is great you are a very great poet all your poems are awesome.Everyone you write i will be sure to read.5/5.
xoxoSweet_tearsxoxo

I especially liked this poem!
Its very nice written. You obviously love this girl

keep up the good work ;)

I liked it alot xxxx keep writing

Whoa! That was an awesome poem! it like blew me away! It was very well written! and the rhyme scheme seemed to work! loved it! 5/5
Keep Writing
And
Keep smiling

-*-Tormented

Oh And WELCOME To The CLUB!!
Hope you like it there!

I crushin on her hard I wonder if she knows
((I'm crushing on her so hard...))

This was much better than the rest...You could feel the emotion in it and you didn't compare her to food. I really liked it.. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Short and Sweet...It's good 5/5 keep up the good work...

Melissa

I liked 'I don't know if this is love or lust but this girl has me spellbound'

good job!
5/5

Wow thats amazing!! I like it a lot keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!

Laura

Wow! Amazing poem! I love it... I dont know what to say

Sweet

Your a good writer i wish i could say the same about myself :P 5/5