Oh, this poem is so great with great emotions in it, as i can relate to it.
it is so nice the way you have put the words together, it did reminded me a time period of my past,
it is so greatly written and so well done.
I really love it
5/5

I liked it. It makes me sad though. Guys are jerks!!!

Aww that was such a nice and sad poem. I almost cried. Its so true the way boys could brake your heart. kepp it up.

Oh this is a great poem. I loveddddd the way you wrote this one!! So sad but true...well I don't know if thats what you're going through atm...but a lot of people have and will go through that at some point in life. Take care,

[[ Poetess ]]

Nice poem...loved it sarah..

Nice poem i really liked it i like how ur talking about holding hands cuz da probably made u feel special and den he held her hands u probably felt really sad well i like it greatjob and i give u 5/5

Aww this poem is filled with emotions! its soo sad! feels so real and true!
keep it up!

Thanks for the comment on my poem! it means alot to me!