by Willow Aug 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She's fed up with life, |
by SunDown Sky
This is O_O |
by xo kisses xo
That is really good. it really appealed to me cuz i just couldn't quit reading it! great job 5/5 |
Very good, deep, and creative |
I really hope your friend Tami is ok and iddn't do n e thing she would regret in life... but this poem speaks to me in a way that i have never really been spoken to... you catch my attention and take me for the full ride throughout the poem. great skill.... wish i could have a lil bit of it... keep up the awesome work |
This was amazing it stared of a bit simple but it evolved into a materpiece i really liked the metaphor And hold her while her tears rain it was so sad and made it more true and i could feel the pain as i read it :):) xxx alex xxx |